Friday, June 24, 2011
Reminder for all Moms
Friday, June 17, 2011
Wednesday, June 15, 2011
Country Report
Our Graduation and Recital
Dear Parents,
Our class is really looking forward to our graduation! We are all busy getting ready for the recital.
Before the recital begins all the parents will visit the classroom where student awards will be given.
Thanks so much!
Morah Rivki
Monday, June 13, 2011
Graduation invites
Dear Parents:
In preparation for the upcoming commencement week, each student will receive 2 invitations to send out to family and family friends (i.e. Grandparents, aunts and uncles, extended family, family friends or neighbors) Being that the invitations will be mailed from the school, we request that you provide the addresses of the 2 people/ families that you and your child would like to invite to their class graduation or recital.
Please fill out the information on the form in your child's homework folder or you can email me the information (rivkiangy@gmail.com). We will be sending out the invitations tomorrow!
Thanks,
Morah Rivki
Invitation 1 will be sent to:
Name:__________________________________________________________________________________
Street address:_________________________________________________________ Apt. #_____________
City:_______________________________________________ State:____________ Zip code:____________
Invitation 2 will be sent to:
Name:__________________________________________________________________________________
Street address:_________________________________________________________ Apt. #_____________
City:_______________________________________________ State:____________ Zip code:____________
Friday, June 3, 2011
Water Bottle
It's important for us to drink at all times during the day, especially during the summer weeks. I am happy for everyone to drink at any time during lesson from a bottle. As a general rule we only use the class bottle to pour ourselves drinks during snack/recess/ lunch time. During lesson time there can be accidents - spilt water over our work and it can be too distracting. So individual bottles are more practical.
Thanks so much,
Morah Rivki
Thursday, June 2, 2011
Our Writing - Almost Published!
- We learnt about leads - writers decide on a gradual beginning of their writing or a lead directly into the action.
- We learnt about structure - writers decide on the structure of their writing so that it is accessible and easily understood by the reader. We practiced 'repetitive word structure', like in "Water Dance".
- We learnt about 'voice' and how writers decide on what kind of feeling they want to give over to the reader and how their personality is going to come through in their writing.
Once most of us had completed our drafts we went on to revising. We discussed that most writers agree that 80% of their work going in to revising and making their writing better.
- One strategy that writers use to revise is to change the verbs that they use into more 'vivid verbs' to make their writing more powerful and interesting.
We are now up to editing our work. We will be reading over our pieces to check that the punctuation we have used gives power to our words!
We hope to publish soon so that we can share some of our published pieces by the recital!